Comments on: The Promise

By: shiyah

shiyah — Wed, 07 Mar 2012 18:33:03 +0000

This story is made scary i just can not keep reading that book like wow muah <3<3

By: Summer

Summer — Thu, 29 Sep 2011 13:11:47 +0000

This is amazing! And it was twisted, and it definitalt caught my attention! Great! Amazing! )

By: Jennifer Clancy

Jennifer Clancy — Wed, 21 Sep 2011 04:39:54 +0000

Some of you got the point of this story very well. A few of you seem a bit muddled up about what exactly happened!

By: laytoe

laytoe — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:12:22 +0000

well jennifer ….
I think stroy is about love becuse there are two boy name called Tom and Clay who promises each other…..

By: Raynaldo

Raynaldo — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:10:52 +0000

Well Jennifer,
I think the reasonhwy Tom couldn’t go back to Heavan was b’cause he was still alive not dead yet, and you can’t be a heavan when you are alive….

By: lay k'paw moo

lay k'paw moo — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:10:22 +0000

this is was a really good story an amazing and i love to read it but i don’t understand why clay didn’t keep his promise yet and tom did it….Tom break his promise with his bestmate clay. it’s was sort sad and scary at the same time….”

By: chuki

chuki — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:08:52 +0000

very sad

By: Hsar

Hsar — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:08:28 +0000

xi tom is not dead yet so he can’t go back there. propabaly when his die then he might go back there i think…

By: klu say

klu say — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:08:06 +0000

it is scary but not that scary. i think tom break his pomise but i think he didn’t mean too. it a good story and it also sad and feel sorry for both of them. i feel very sorry for Tom wife because Tom leaft and never came back to her.

By: hadijah

hadijah — Tue, 20 Sep 2011 00:05:22 +0000

i think he will never go back again because he didn’t keep time and the heaven’s door were closed.